She did have one loyal friend though, and he was a dog named Ranger. Ranger was older, more experienced with Olive's schemes, but didn't always learn from them. He loved to chase after Olive, or any animal that ran away from him, and was always smiling. Good-natured, but gullible, Ranger and Olive had a delicate friendship.
One winter was especially difficult, and Olive, who was already naturally sassy, became even more surly when she was hungry. One day she couldn't take it anymore, she told Ranger that their friendship had to end so they could each survive. She made Ranger promise that they would never again cross paths and must live forever a part. Both agreed and went on their way.
Ranger was hurt but didn't want to fight, so he moped away. Olive shrugged him off, and promptly went to a nearby house to the comforts of a warm fire and plenty of mice. She pawed at the door of the old wood home and was let in, greeted with a warm dish of milk and a soft carpet. By day she caught mice in an old barn and at night curled up in the chair by fireplace. Content and satisfied, Olive went to sleep every night with a full stomach.
Ranger, on the other hand, had more problems. Reduced to wandering the forests and surrounded fields for food, many nights he was starving and in search of shelter. He happened upon sheep, who allowed him to share their shelter if he warned them of wolves. Loyal and obedient, Ranger successfully scared off a pack of wolves in the night.
As Ranger continued on his journey he happened upon a wood house in the forest. Delirious, starving and desperate he went to the door to beg for food. He was let in and given a bowl of food, then he promptly fell asleep. During the night he heard a ruckus, went outside and drove away another pack of wolves. His time in the wilderness alone had harden him, given him grey hairs and made him more intimidating. When he returned the owner had awaken to the noise and thanked Ranger for his service, saying he could stay as long as he wanted as a watch dog.
When Olive awoke she was surprised to see Ranger there as well. Angered by his break of agreement, she refused to speak to him. Ranger remained bashful and timid around her, never wanting to cross her path. Olive tried many times to make Ranger leave, playing tricks and planning schemes, but the homeowner wouldn't kick him out. Frustrated, Olive resolved to just ignoring his presence and hissing whenever he came near.
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Author's Note. This story is based on The Quarrel Of The Cat And The Dog from The Jewish Fairy Tales. The plot is almost the same, I just added more detail names to the characters. I liked the ending moral that this is show dogs and cats interact to this day, so I kept that idea when I retold the story. I think anyone that has a cat or a dog can relate to how they act together.
Bibliography. The Quarrel Of The Cat And The Dog from The Jewish Fairy Tales by Gertrude Landa (1919).
This was an interesting story, and at the end the theme made sense! I love how folk tales always have some type of lesson or explanation to be told. I haven't heard of this story before, and I'm glad I came across this post. Good job! You did a great job in filling in the details that the original tale left out, as you had mentioned in your author's note.
ReplyDeleteThis was especially enjoyable to read because I live in a house with a dog and two cats, who chase each other all the time. I really like your use of adjectives and attention to detail, as it helps give the characters in the story an attitude and a connection to the reader. I even began to feel sorry for the dog when he got left out in the cold!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job in retelling this story. I loved your use of detail and imagery. You're also right in saying that this is how dogs and cats act to this day. It is very odd and also rare to see a dog and cat that actually enjoy each other's company. I think you did an amazing job though! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI really liked this! It makes sense too because my stepdad's dog was terrified of our cat at first, but then we would always see them napping together haha. I really liked your use of detail to show the characters and make a connection; it really helped to visualize them. Especially poor Ranger! I was really glad that family let him stay, even after Olive tried to get him kicked out.
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